Podcast Draft

 This was written and edited by my team member Kimi

EP. 1 - The Black Dahlia

First Draft

This is the first draft of episode 1 of our podcast. Erina voiced the narrator and part of the advert and Hugo voiced the Intro and the advert. I was the one who edited the recordings and added BGM and SFX, outro not included yet.

Mr Nick listened to it and gave us a few feedback and suggestions:

• 1,10 - the time between when you stop speaking and when the music starts is too long.
• the audio in the tape recording sections is a little quiet. 
• 6,18 - "call Manly? for help" Maybe have a dial tone play as background music 
• try a different accent for the recorded voices, especially the man. Maybe experiment with a male voice to see if it works. 
•  the gag about being interrupted breaks with the tone of the show, just go to "And now a word from our sponsor
• For the outro music, I would read out the credits. "Written by ....., edited by.... voice acting by...." Or maybe a teaser for the next weeks episode. 
• Intro. Are you going to have the podcast name at the start of the show?

Second Draft

Changes:

• Added intro, outro, credits and "This has been a Regents Media Production"
• Changed Hodel's dialogue to Jaydon's voice (Guest Actor)
• Changed Bersinger's dialogue to Lynn's voice (Guest Actor)
• Lowered the pitch of Erina's voice LAPD dialogue (temporary, erina's friend is going to voice this)
• 4,51 - Added opening letter/envelope sfx
• 6,12 - Added dial tone sfx 
• 8,42 - Added stop tape recording sfx
• Removed advert gag

Third Draft

Changes:

• Added "Episode 1: The Black Dahlia" in intro
• Changed LAPD dialogue to Lynn's voice (Guest Actor)
• updated credits

EP. 2 - Jack the Ripper

First Draft

 

This is the first draft of episode 2 of our podcast. I was the one who edited the recordings and added BGM and SFX

Mr Nick listened to it and gave us a few feedback and suggestions:

• Intro: (while the music is playing). Hugo does a great job outlining the show, can he say the name of the episode as well? eg. “Episode 2: Jack the Ripper” (do this for your first episode, too)

• Charles Cross scream at the beginning: is it possible to find a different sound effect. Maybe a guy confused, “what’s that” (scared) “oh my god”. If not, no worries, keep the scream.

• The teaser for the next episode is Jack the ripper again. Is this a mistake?

Second Draft

Changes:

• Added "Episode 2: The Black Dahlia" in intro
• Added dialogue for Charles cross by Arvin (Guess Actor)
• Fixed teaser for next episode (the Zodiac killer)
• Updated credits